One day there was a apple ladies who sold apples and one second later a man came and whooshed and stole from the well the was on magic carpet and the apple lady said COME BACK she cried and the apple lady ran to her and told them about the apple and ran but it was to late but the police got about it and the police ran and he jumped AND THE PROBLEM WAS solved
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Wednesday, 11 November 2020
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that was really fun to read Joshua it was funny and cool
ReplyDeletethank you joseph (:
ReplyDeletehi joshy
ReplyDeletei like your post a lot joshy
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